Project 3 - Jonathon Yule Critique

Really well executed video. The drawings are really well done and very consistent in terms of style and detailing. Good choice with the creamy color background, makes it look more personal/drawn, sketching kind of style. Sound could be synched a bit more to the images (when things are being listed off), and also the background music could be turned up a bit louder, because its a very simple melody it won't be distracting or competing with the voiceover. Overall the video keeps the viewer interested throughout the whole story, the characters work really well, which is the main point of interest in my opinion.